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I might add to this over time off and on.

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Last Updated

01-25-2021

Cover

No extra cover on this one, I did some looking into a few others but I really liked the hands reaching in this one. I picture Urel reaching out

Next Life

I don't always name the next life, the time line is all over the place with these. But I think, the life after this is Sess.

Alternate Ending(s)

Which do you like best?

Current ending (The story is suppose to end with Atley ultimatly going down a similar path as his mother in drugging Amina without her realizing it. He does this to keep her with him and from the world.) (I'm aware it jumps around a lot but Amina has some damage after the poisoning and it's from her pov.) For little extra's..Dr. Neevis saved Amina...then Atley killed his mother the maid Madeline saw. They treat Amina while hiding the bodies. At one point Amina's parents come, they don't kill them but throw them out. Word gets to Chuckie they can't see her so he breaks in finds her near catatonic as she is recovering from being poisined. He is taken down by Dr. Neevis and this is the moment Atley is like no one will ever enter this house again. Later when Amina recovers...she wants to go out and Atley almost lost her once so he is all no...So they drug her...but then Atley drugs her a bit too much wanting to make love to her and at the end we see Amina in a haze or what day is it.

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This is the first ending I shared(At around 4 am lol I was like lets just cut it short...before...she get drugged >< But then I was like this feels very abrupt. So I put the extended ending back in play)

Mrs. Kessle just sat there pleasatnly hummming….humming waiting for me to die. I wouldn't go quiet...I mustered a weak scream….I screamed for my dear life as pain rippled through me. I felt like my insides were burnig. I convulsed on the floor but there was nothing I could do...nothing that could be done... Suddenly someones...feet appeared before me….I felt them lift...my eyes opened and closed Atley….

"EEEEVVVVEEERR"

He shouted for helps as he stuggled to gather me up in in his arms...and I wanted to apologize to say I was sorry...I...I wasn't going to be able to keep my vow after all...I wasn't...I wasn't going to be able to stay with him. Tears escaped my eyes, he dipped his finger in them and then all I heard were Atley. "STAY WITH ME...STAY WITH ME...AMINA...BE MINE….BE MINE… AMINA… AMINA!"

"In a forest, beyond a golden meadow you will find a lake and at the edge of this lake there is a small cottage-"

A voice in the darkness…I heard a voice. Such a beautiful voice...it called to me….pulled in and for a moment I listened. I knew the words I knew this...this book it was my favorite. My other she...she...read it to me when I was little.

"Within the cottage lives, a couple, a man, his wife and their dreams...Oh how the couple dreamed, not of fortune, not of fair but of children they could share. We shall have one with apple cheeks the man would say. One with hair of gold said the wife. We shall not care be it a boy or a girl...We shall have so many children we will have no time...no room to spare.

"I think that is enough for today," said another voice.

"No" said the first voice, "Not until she falls asleep,"

"Atley…."

"I can hear it...in her breathing, she hears me, she's here with me,"

I heard a heavy sigh, "Don't stay up too late, again"

Then footsteps, something touched me, I don't know where. "Don't worry Amina, I shall read to you until you fall asleep,"

I heard movement and then the voice clear and soft

"Oh how the couple did dream and one winters moon their dream came true and a child was born to them with hair of gold and apple cheeks. It was not a boy but a girl. They called her Meadow and how she would roam, up trees and hills-"

I drifted falling back, back into the darkness of my mind...

Cut off

At the ened I removed- but I wasn’t alone...all the me’s the we’s we’ve ever been were here with me in the garden of our mind waiting...waiting for our time...to begin again.

I thought it would be to confusing. I plan to get into this

Everyone has their own way of managing things compartamentalizing. I butchered that word didn't I...It's like 4 am LOL.

Anyway I don't want to confuse you all but...there are new versions of themselves everytime they are reborn. They have memories or like things that are true to their core being but each time they have different lives...thus different memories.

Since it's the website and you really got to go roaming to get here I'll discuss spoilers a little more.

For Keyoko she makes her like "mind palace" place the maze garden. Even thought it was originally a prison for her she has used it to help her keep track of and cope with the curse. Each life she has lived becomes like a statue when she dies. The part of Keyoko that is trapped in the stone is always walking around in the garden.

But the part that is reborn...is new to it.

Example

So picture Ella from Confess as a statue. Now as Amina, she could walk up to the Ella statue and touch it and she would know all the things Ella knew in her time and feel what she felt and all that would come back to her...if Amina was awakened. When they are unawakened it's more like she is asleep in the garden unable to walk around unable to see the other's she has been.

Status can also crumble if something happen...or be repaired. I also picure a large pit in her garden to represent darkness...you can always fall in...and its not so easy to crawl back out.

For someone like Urel I could picture him having a library...running his fingers along the books picking out what he chooses to remeber and what he chooses not to...

Randomness

1-If I could do like lives mash up's I'd want to take her turning at the window to see him.

By mash up's I mean like youtube videos with music videos and flim clips. There are a few lives I'd like to mesh together. My favorite moments are when they meet.

Ther is this one life where Keyoko has a drug dealer boyfriend. And like Urel and Eyo are cooks. Keyokos' boyfriend leaves her in the car. It's a hot day so she lays in the back seat with her sun glasses on, listening to music and her bare feet sticking out the window. Urel walks up and touches her feet. She looks at him and he just looks at her. When he walks off she finally moves and is all what is that. Then her boyfriend comes out of tells he she has to stay with Urel and Eyo. Cause her boyfriend owed them money. He said he'd pay them back. Urel says they'd hold is car and everything in it. Guy is like let me just get my girl out. Urel says everything in it. Keyoko is of course, like no I'm no staying but her boyfriend is like just till I get the money, they'll kill me if I don't...and she's all fine...She sits on their couch and Urel just stares at her...eating chips. You know he doesn't give her back...when the guy pays.

But I like when they meet. I wanted to do a series once where they are all walking around near missing each other. I like you got mail...Like when Tom Hanks and Meg Ryan are just walking about their lives and they have been passing each other by...Hey...I said this was randomness and its like 4 am soo...ramble ramble...EXTRA...

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